Sunday, March 22, 2009

Raining?

oh no, i don't even have a single blog updated this month... this suck..i wonder what bad impression i have set on my lecturer.......

okay, first thing first, i have not forgotten that i have to write a paragraph of figurative words about raining. But... I am at a lost of words... writing a paragraph about raining alone is exhausting enough, what more to write it in a to-confuse-readers-and-let-readers-peel-off-the-layer-and-meaning-behind manner.

Here it goes :

When the God lost his beloved wife, the God cried, pouring out all his sorrow upon the creatures under his feet, the creatures, helpless, bathed in the God's tears, wondered why was their mighty God so sad. The God's helpers sent bright signals to the creatures to inform them about the sad news and to lighten the sky, hoping to cheer up the devastated God. Soaked wet, the creatures beneath mourn for the God's loss, yet wonder when will the sorrow ends, because the over-flowing water were choking the drains and rivers, and gradually engulfing the land. Worried and angry, the creatures shouted upon to the God, but to no avail, all they can do were to pray and pray and pray.

End.


I don't know why, but I wanted to write about the unseen controller of the weather, hence I used God as a main character that caused rain in a form of sadness. Then, I wanted to represent lightning as something planned and done for a purpose and as something good as well. For the creatures, that is us, I wanted them to be helpless. I wonder what will Mr D think about this paragraph...

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